Fic: Right of Conquest (2/2)

[luchia13]

I have a whoooole lotta after-notes for this fic, but I'm already pushing the character limit, SO! Yay fic!

Title: Right of Conquest
Rating: NC-17 (yes, I wrote porn)
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel, hints of Castiel/Lucifer.
Warnings: Evil/good/evil, temptation, Hell, boys kissing (AND MORE NOW!), torture, a different take on Castiel's pony,

Comments

[elessae]

This is some kind of impressive, albeit heartbreaking. I was so worried when Cas and Sam bought into Lucifer's conviction, and goodness, what a wily devil your Devil makes.

Very clever ideas, and so well-written, and I adore the significance of that conquest ring that Dean wears, and when he transferred it onto his ring finger, oh, ♥.

Lovely, lovely, lovely work. Thank you for sharing.

[luchia13]

Thank you! I'm glad Lucifer was devilish enough to make you worried. And I can't help but get a kick out of the fact Dean's walking around wearing a ring worth more than his car and probably his life while totally in denial about being kind of married.

[architeuthis]

This is fascinatingly concieved, pretty disquieting in parts, and ... unanticipatedly hilarious. Dean's crankiness throughout the sex scene in particular made me laugh inappropriately at work, which is at least the one reaction I could have that is least likely to tip my coworkers off to the fact that I'm reading porn. Part two was worth the wait; what a great read.

[luchia13]

I am SO HAPPY you thought it was funny. I personally believe not-that-great sex that makes you want to pound your head against a tree in aggravation adds a ludicrous touch of realism! Probably the only realistic thing in the whole fic! And again, you say every single thing I was aiming for in this fic. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[akanichiyoubi]

I love you. I mean you exceeded all my expectations and I already loved it beforehand. Great choices for the other horsemen, and of course it would be all people Dean knows and loves because he is the only thing that could stop Lucifer, only Lucy didn't get how and why until Cas chose Dean instead. Damn, when Cas put the crown on Dean's head, I was just amazed. This was perfect as just the two parts, perfectly concise and fulfilling. I loved the end too with the wonderful brotherly moment there. Yay for a ring! I would worry about Bela and Tessa, but Tessa is always Death anyway, she'll be fine, and I'm thinking Bela is back to being dead. Well done all around. This is a new favorite and I'm sending a friend to read right now.

[sporadic_ideas]

I'm so glad that I read these parts together. The waiting could've killed me!

An unique story! I really thought it was going to end in doom and gloom, but Dean saves the day! Then the end... ♥

Once again, a really great story. Thanks for sharing. :)

Hey, Kripke & Co! Look at this!

[lizajaneok]

I love this sooooooooo much!!! This would make a kick-ass series ending! Totally engaging, believably in character and pretty fucking in line with canon. Yayzers!! <3<3<3