Fic: Right of Conquest (2/2)

[luchia13]

I have a whoooole lotta after-notes for this fic, but I'm already pushing the character limit, SO! Yay fic!

Title: Right of Conquest
Rating: NC-17 (yes, I wrote porn)
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel, hints of Castiel/Lucifer.
Warnings: Evil/good/evil, temptation, Hell, boys kissing (AND MORE NOW!), torture, a different take on Castiel's pony,

Comments

[cordeliadelayne]

This is amazing. I loved the way Lucifer gradually broke down Castiel's resistance through reason (and I hope this is how it plays out on the show) and Bela turning up was great. The way it all played out with the choice's Sam made too was brilliantly done as well.

[moonlettuce]

This was fabulous. I loved how you used the mythos of the Horsemen. And the bit with the ring at the end had me grinning with glee :D

[neemeister]

Wow! I loved this. Such a clever execution to a clever story concept. The progression of the characters' choices was so in-character and believable. Lucifer was genius. I wanted him to be for real, so given Castiel in canon tends to make the wrong choice for the right reasons (and Sam too, well except for the revenge aspect) it's totally believable that he could fall for Lucifer's line. Hell, by the end of the first chapter, I thought I would be disappointed if Lucifer turned out to be pulling a con (the concept of him being legit such a different and intriguing angle), you crafted him that persuasively.

But then the progression to the Four Horsemen you wove through the last half was so natural, and the means of his defeat so beautiful and brilliant in its simplicity, I can't imagine it playing out any other way. I actually would be more than happy if the show went this route.

Loved loved loved the last bit with the crown-ring and Sam teasing Dean in that little brother way. So Sam and so adorable. Thanks. :)

[marevas]

You are a wonderful, wonderful person to share this with us.

[laura_trekkie]

Lucifer's so very sneaky, but it looks like Dean got the last laugh! It was easy to see how Cas and Sam got drawn in by Lucifer's logical arguments, but I'm glad Dean never was. He saw the real side of Lucifer- jealous and cruel :(.

Good job Conquest had some sense! *g* Lucifer's grand plan, so carefully collecting Horsemen with a connection to Dean, presumably to rub it in a bit more, and all along it was that connection that would be his downfall. Neat way of averting the Apocalypse, allowing Sam to go about his life free of the urges of War and of keeping Cas in check. Plus it made for a cute scene at the end *g*.

Laura.