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The Rain - Chapter 16 (final chapter)

Jan 14, 2011 21:45

Title: The Rain
Pairing: Kris/Adam
Rating: NC-17 occasionally
Warnings: some violence and horror elements
Summary: AI8 tour. Adam is involved in a serious car accident that leaves him struggling to recover emotionally. Kris tries to help but is soon dealing with his own internal crisis.

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Comments 23

wikken January 16 2011, 10:10:32 UTC

blueeyesforlife January 19 2011, 07:40:32 UTC

*seal claps* Heeee. Love it so much. Silly boys! Running around and around in circles like that! Nice to see it resolved. (Or is it? Maybe we need an epilogue/sequel to see how that works out. *whistles innocently*)

(lol Kris scaring Danny away with some "innocent" "accidental" innuendos. And I was completely prepared to have Kris punch Raj in the face, since I am physically unable to do so.)

Anyway! This has been rambly. I'm bookmarking this fic for future perusing. Much love <3

lucidseeming January 19 2011, 19:14:21 UTC

Thank you. It's so rewarding to hear that you liked it. I do think it needs an epilogue. I felt it kind of cut off abruptly, but a) I don't think I'm that good at writing intimacy, and b) I was desperate to get the friggin' thing done. :) Oh, and Kris was supposed to punch Raj. That was a tentative plan, and I should've worked harder to make that happen. Maybe if there's an epilogue...

adammlambert3 January 19 2011, 10:11:29 UTC

this was absolutely amazing. <3

lucidseeming January 19 2011, 19:18:14 UTC

Thank you! I hoped that someone would enjoy it, and yet still I'm surprised. :)

penrith1 January 19 2011, 10:37:48 UTC

This was a really great read. Very engrossing. But I kinda feel we need an epilogue. I would love a tender scene between these two now they are finally on the same page. Lol

lucidseeming January 19 2011, 19:20:32 UTC

Yes, you're right. It doesn't take you all the way home, does it? I spent time rewriting all the earlier chapters, then just rushed the end. Well, maybe that can be remedied... Thank you for taking the time to let me know you liked it.

pinkeurogirl January 19 2011, 13:34:07 UTC

Amazing!! The aftermath of the accident, kris realising his feelings. I need to know what happens after. :-)

lucidseeming January 19 2011, 19:28:38 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked it. There does seem to be a consensus that it isn't quite finished. I'll have to see if the guys can give us an update. :)