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Nov 17, 2004 22:48

For eugooglytobiko, who challenged me to write an angst poem using only the rhyme 'spud ( Read more... )

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eulogytobiko November 18 2004, 15:54:11 UTC
Oh, love. I feel its pain. I'm honoured to have such a high quality piece of writing dedicated to me.

xxx

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luciente November 19 2004, 12:01:13 UTC
*bows gallantly* It was my pleasure to write it for you.

I need to get over this peculiar 17th century fetish, don't I?

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gibeltarik November 18 2004, 16:37:25 UTC
You shouldn't have started this....

Ode to a Spud

From worthless spud to glorious chip
And now the subject of a mindless quip
So here’s an interesting culinary tip
For those that love to eat and kip
Dressed to tempt by salsa dip
Accompanied by a Chardonnay sip
Ingested past some luscious lip
I end up forming curvaceous hip.
From worthless spud to glorious chip
I knew I’d end up as a VIP … (Very Important Potato)

Anon

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o0the_hand0o November 18 2004, 20:42:58 UTC
pmsl you two are fantastic. I'd like to know how long it took you to do those lol.
Clare! Guess what (you wont believe this)! I got an A* on my first piece of English coursework! ME! Would you believe?!
Love you all
Sammixx

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luciente November 19 2004, 11:58:13 UTC
Hey, nice one, 'mantha.

*applauds*

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luciente November 19 2004, 12:01:49 UTC
*is in awe* I guess my prodigious gift must be genetic, then.

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luciente November 19 2004, 11:59:54 UTC
I miss rhyme :/ It made me happy to read Eliot and see him rhyme 'meticulous' with 'ridiculous'. I knew there was a reason why that one's my favourite of his poems.

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