Cheating Challenge

[lucifercircle]

Title: Hard Guy
Author: Luciferofthecircle
Rating: PG-13, for implied violence.
Word Count: 468
Notes: More introspection. This one’s a lot more depressing. Many thanks to Ultra_chrome for betaing this for me.
Disclaimer: I really wish I owned them, but I don’t.
Summary: Ray really doesn’t want to do this.

Comments

[ride_4ever]

Absolutely stunning and perfect. You totally get RayV's situation and his thoughts, and you present that so effectively through the interaction with your OC Luciano (who you really bring to life with that brief and yet evocative description).

And that last line! Powerful and layered!