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mardigrasmaven July 18 2007, 02:20:13 UTC

Waiiii!! He's so jealous of the motorbike! It's taking his human away from him!
(Alright, so it was more like an insult. He’s much better than that “motorcycle” Lennox took with him. He had guns!)
MWAHAHAHA!! Jealousy if I ever heard it! Possessive much, Ironhide? And Lennox in leather.... mmmmmm, sounds delicious... XD Party time!

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

mercy_slays July 18 2007, 05:21:20 UTC

Ironhide jealous of a motorbike is just hilarious in my opinion. -snickers- Ain't no doubt about it that something is really off with the idea but who cares. >3;

Thanks for the review!

im_unloved July 18 2007, 03:00:18 UTC

interesting,and you have ironhide's *waves cannons infront of your face* attitude down pat.can't wait for the next installment.

mercy_slays July 18 2007, 05:20:01 UTC

Thanks! I was a bit hesitant on his voice in this since basically, I don't really work with that type of character much and I was worried. ^^;

Hopefully I can turn out the next part soon~. =D

rin_x_x July 18 2007, 03:08:12 UTC

Ooh. Holosex. XD I have no idea how you're going with this, but it certainly seems interesting. :D

mercy_slays July 18 2007, 05:17:03 UTC

Thanks! Personally, I have no idea where I'm going either. ^^; Just taking it as it appears in my head, but we'll see what happens. =d

Not sure if I want to pull out my "secret" weapon out yet or not, though.

demeter_servant July 18 2007, 03:16:48 UTC

Threesome for the win! >XD

mercy_slays July 18 2007, 05:15:54 UTC

LOL, well that's one vote for a threesome thus far. ^^

millionshards July 18 2007, 04:58:00 UTC

Good start, looking forward to more.

mercy_slays July 18 2007, 05:15:16 UTC

Thanks. =d Hopefully, I can get the rest out soon. ^^

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