On the Outside, Watching

[luciferhisaki]

Title: On the Outside, Watching
Author: Lucifer Hisaki (mercy_slays/luciferhisaki)
Rating: PG
Fandom: Marvel
Pairing: Steve Rogers/Tony Stark
Summary: In which Tony watches everyone celebrate Steve's return while being ignored almost completely.
Disclaimer: I hardly know my way around Comic Canon. Do you really think I own Marvel? But I would love to own RDJ!Tony's ass!

Comments

[tazer_alex]

Arggh. Ok, that was painful.
Tony! Nooo!
But, Steve! Yay, aliveness!

Also, this fic was great and well written.
Even if it's not beta'd, it's still wonderful and it's IC. Any fic that has Tony angsting is in character.

[mercy_slays]

Painful? Oh dear, it seems that almost everyone reviewed thought it was painful. I suppose that's a good thing, huh?

Thanks for the review. =)

[manderkitty]

That was great! (and incredibly painful)

I'd love to see more.

[mercy_slays]

Considering this is part of a five week five-fic challenge... You should see the next part sometime before Friday. No promises. ^^;

Thank you for your comment!

[axolotl_lan]

End? - does this mean you are willing to continue with sufficient prodding and excessive praise because I could totally do that- <3 Woooobie Tony, and is he having a heartatache or is this classic mystical broken heart syndrome? Either way the mood and the outside looking in perspective from Tony was fantastic Great work!~

[mercy_slays]

Prod all you want. I still need to meet my deadline for the second fic of this mini-series by Friday this week. =P

<3 Woooobie Tony, and is he having a heartatache or is this classic mystical broken heart syndrome?

I really can't say because I really don't want to give it away and Tony isn't really telling me the reason for it, either!

[axolotl_lan]

<3 Yay... I hope

woobie Tony is a picture taken from the drinking ark- note the alcohol bottle on the bottom right.

[mercy_slays]

-laughs- It wasn't until I came to Marvel fandom did I learn what a Woobie was. ^_^;

[mercy_slays]

I should have the next installment up by Friday, or Saturday at the latest. =)

Thanks for the comment!

[runenklinge]

have I something more coherent to say than: Moar, please?

...aside from "great fic"...not really

[mercy_slays]

At least you commented on it! That's all I really care about! =D;;;

Expect something on Friday/Saturday. No promises. Depends on the muses.