Fic: Your Littlest Sin

[lucklessforhim]

Title: Your Littlest Sin
Author: lucklessforhim
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 / Language, sexual content.
Word Count: ~3750
Pairings: Jesse/Rachel
Summary: I'm tired of who I am, you were my greatest mistake, I fell in love with your sin. / a loose fill for glee_kink_meme prompt HERE
Spoilers: Journey to Regionals and Funk.
Disclaimer: I do not own Glee or any of

Comments

[selivia_wanders]

There was so much angst running through this story I felt like crying. So beautiful, and I loved how you left it open for them since we all know they are the true endgame :D Great job!

[lucklessforhim]

Oh, goodness, I know! SO much angst for these two!

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for commenting! I agree completely...they are ENDGAME (for me, at least)! Thank you! ♥

[androgenyus]

This was... incredible! *_* I mean, holy shit. Iloveeverythingyouwriteneverstopwritingjfkdlafj I felt so much downright visceral hurt for both of them here, it was so sad and perfect, my god.

When he said there were three people in this relationship, I honestly thought he was talking about Shelby at first...... which would have made sense, too!!!

I LOVELOVELOVED him drinking on the stage. His entire conversation with her was PERFECT and SPOT ON. It was like I felt every single emotion.

When he told her that he'd miss her, my heart broke for them SO MUCH.

I'm SO SORRY you had to write this with a migraine D: but it doesn't show AT ALL.

[lucklessforhim]

YOU'RE SO SWEET! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I really tried to capture that feeling of "I hate you for good reasons, but I still love you as much I don't want to" and that just made it unbelievably angsty.

That would have made sense! There really were so many extra people in their relationship, it's ridiculous. But, for Jesse's perspective here, it was Rachel stringing him along that caused the damage.

Ah! Thank you! I feel like Jesse is the type to just get completely smashed, cry it out, and move on in the morning. That conversation...it kind of hurt me to write it.

Oh. I know! Mine too. :'(

Thank you! I'm doing MUCH better, and I'm really glad you couldn't tell!

[androgenyus]

OF COURSE!!! <3<3<3

IT'S VERY DEPRESSING but that also makes it very realistic and v v good. Seriously.

I never noticed how many people were involved in their business! That's ridiculous! HOW DID I NOT NOTICE.

He really is the kind to get totally smashed and emo for about a night. And then, THE SHOW MUST GO ON. Can't have anyone holding him back, after all.

<3 how did the walk-through go with your asshole landlord??

I hate how conditional the internet at my mom's place is. It's like I'm not supposed to be online, I'm supposed to be doing things with them, and if they found out that I was only there for the internet... my mom would sigh dramatically and tell me "ohhhh so that's why you're here."

Luckily, we got to leave early last night instead of staying the whole weekend. Not so luckily, this meant no more internet. Which is why we... escaped to... panera to internet. Yes this was an awesome plan, I agree. :p

[lucklessforhim]

IT'S VERY DEPRESSING but that also makes it very realistic and v v good. Seriously.
I didn't even realize how...bleak and depressing it was until I finished editing it, and I was like "uh...that's so shitty." I felt BAD for doing it to them!

It's kind of ridic. Finn, Shelby, Schue, Puck (briefly).

He really is the kind to get totally smashed and emo for about a night. And then, THE SHOW MUST GO ON. Can't have anyone holding him back, after all.
THIS IS EXACTLY IT.

LOL, panera for internet is always an awesome plan. Their coffee...sooooo good!

[luckytohaveher]

Rachel and Jesse need to be endgame. And you need to start writing for the show.

This is a Rachel Berry I can relate to not Murphy's caricature.

Great job, bb. Hot and painful and just beautiful.

[lucklessforhim]

Haha! I agree with both of those statements. I would be THRILLED to write a St. Berry ending for the show.

I certainly took some liberties with Rachel here, and made her a little bolder than she normally would be. But, I really thought that she wouldn't have been herself in this situation. He...does things to her.

Thank you, honey. So glad you read it and liked it. ♥

[lucklessforhim]

Thank you! What a lovely comment. I'm so glad you liked it! Rachel and Jesse are MY endgame, no matter what. Thank you for reading and commenting!

[nubianamy]

Ahh, the angsty angst. Jesse was perfect, and Rachel's indecision and final choice felt right. Nicely done.

[lucklessforhim]

This is very, very angsty. Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad they felt true to character for you. I'm glad you liked it.