Comments | lumberxjill: how's it gonna be when you're not around?

lumberxjill

how's it gonna be when you're not around?

Mar 02, 2009 00:17

The TOUR!AU is finally done. And it has a name now, which is pretty sweet. It's not very long, but it doesn't need to be I guess. I hope you love it.

and it's like I can't feel a thing without you around.
ryan && brendon
2457 words

( and don't mind me if I get weak in the knees cause you have that effect on me. )

fic!. brendon/ryan

Comments 12

melody_so_sweet March 2 2009, 06:40:25 UTC

this is me stealing comment space.
even if it's un-needed

lumberxjill March 2 2009, 07:14:36 UTC

iloveyou. just saying =]

melody_so_sweet March 2 2009, 07:38:20 UTC

I spotted Rach-oopsies:

He yawns a little, stretches slowly and steps forward to pull down the comforter on the bed to his right and start spreading extra blankets across the it.
(you mean "...across it.") :D

...and Ryan, he can't do anything but listen
(and a period at the end of this sentence)

okay. mean-typo-pointing-out-time is over.

I love how you hardly notice that Ryan doesn't talk at all, until he does, and you're like "woah". well, at least I was.

you have such a vivid way of saying things, and I can see and hear and freakin smell everything you describe. I love the way you use visuals to describe things that aren't visual at all. Smells, sounds, kisses, feelings. I love this so much, but then again, I love everything you write.

lumberxjill March 2 2009, 16:17:24 UTC

*scurries back to fix* =D.

Not mean! Helpful and I love you for it, you know this XD.

Gah, I'm kinda thinking no one else will pick up on how important it is that Ryan doesn't talk for like, ever. Well, it's not super important to the story, but it adds a lot. Or at least, I think it does.

*beams*. I love that you love it. And I spend most of my time writing doing the descriptions, I want the people who read this to feel it like I did.

Thank you really doesn't do you justice, but there it is. <333

shattered_ink March 2 2009, 07:08:27 UTC

Oh my God, my heart.
I feel all light and fluttery after reading this.
Ryan and Brendon and their thing and everything about this = love.

'I am his moon'.

<3

lumberxjill March 2 2009, 07:17:55 UTC

Eep.

I'm glad I made you fluttery, it's kind the the reaction I was aiming for =]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it <3

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lumberxjill March 8 2009, 04:17:28 UTC

Oh, =].

Thank you, very much. Ha, I pretty much write in descriptions, they're what I spend the most time on and it makes me so happy when people like them, when they think I write them well.

<33

cynicsandsaints March 8 2009, 08:26:34 UTC

OH EM EFF GEE.
You finished it! It's lovely and gorgeous and wonderful omg<3333
I loved this, seriously, it's so brilliant.

lumberxjill March 9 2009, 04:09:05 UTC

=D

Thank you so much, <3333

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lumberxjill March 15 2009, 16:51:07 UTC

Oh, thank you so much =]. I'm pretty much at a loss for words because I'm so smiley about your comment. Just know that I'm grateful.

I'm so, so happy that you picked up on the fact that Ryan didn't speak until the end, because that was a really important detail to me, and so few people who read it noticed =/.

Mem? *beams*

Thank you, again...

<333