is this to emo kid?

[lunarspiral]

Hey, I am taking a poetry class, but I'm not sure if I suck or not so I'm going to post them on here for people to read them, and tell me what they think, I'm not trying to be all emo kid and shove my emotions out there for everyone to see, well I am but not for that reason, I just want to see how my poems go over. I have no idea whats with me and

Comments

[theevilboy]

a tad emo, but it seems to have a bit of latent goth in it too... with all the mention of veins.
you little vampire loving goth chick

my dear tana

[shadow_stabber]

Earth, fire, wind,
Do you remember me?
I remember you...

Hello there, dear. Tis Amanda. Figured I'd say hello. I misssssss you. We need to start hanging out on a regular basis. And I like your poem. I was just thinking how exotic it sounded when I read the requirements. Lol. Still, I like it. It makes me sad in that way that isn't bad. Or something. Anyway. Ttfn. ae

Re: my dear tana

[lunarspiral]

Yes we do, and thank you there were two typeo's i have yet to fix, i'll get around to it some day lol. I'm on springbreak all next week come see me.

Tana

Re: my dear tana

[shadow_stabber]

Yay. Miss you guys. I need to stop being so flaky. I'll call ya, I'm switching jobs again.

Re: my dear tana

[lunarspiral]

wow that was the quickest reply ever, gez u sitch jobs a lot lol.

Tana