Comments | lunaticmare: Almost Lover

lunaticmare

Almost Lover

Apr 04, 2011 19:45

Title: Almost Lover
Paring: Pep Guadiola/Bojan Krkic
Disclaimer: I wish it was true.
Notes: This fic is inspired by the song Almost Lover

( They kiss and they fuck but they don’t really talk about it afterward. )

pep/bojan

Comments 18

lets_get_messi April 4 2011, 20:49:11 UTC

Aww this was so sad! I want Pep to come back and say he loves him! :( Good storyline I liked it a lot! Well done! :) <3 x

lunaticmare April 5 2011, 02:38:04 UTC

I'm really glad you like it.
This couple is really hard to write. ahahah.

willywho April 4 2011, 21:24:36 UTC

It hurts. Bojan shouldn't be hurt in anyway because he is far too precious.

Do you think you can make a sequel of this where Bojan and Pep do get a happy ending or something ? Or do you prefer to let it as it is ?

It seriously hurts and it's beautiful. Alison's voice is perfect.

lunaticmare April 5 2011, 02:40:06 UTC

I thought of making a sequel too but I don't know if I can really do it.
I mean, this one is hard enough to write (I have never written this couple before)
I will try : D

thanks for your lovely comment

willywho April 5 2011, 10:47:40 UTC

You did it pretty well if you ask me. Really, it was beautiful.
Oh you just made my day. It would be awsome if you try, like for real. :D
Hopefully you will think about it seriously soon.

xxx

lunaticmare April 5 2011, 11:12:20 UTC

I have a lot of free time right now (school loooong break) so yeah! i was trying to write fic today.

ps. if it is only me or livejournal is very slow today...
ps2. i blush. heehee never thought my fic would make anyone's day.

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fc_jenny April 4 2011, 22:52:13 UTC

awwwwwww, I love this song so much
I was wishing that someone will write a fic base on this song hahaha and you did!!!!!
It so sad, but I love it
feel sorry for Bojan , but this is beautiful~~~~~

lunaticmare April 5 2011, 02:41:10 UTC

I love this song too and I was wishing someone would write this song base about it but since I can't wait anymore I decided to do it myself ahaha.

I'm glad you like it <3

sumrndmgrl April 5 2011, 00:35:27 UTC

I liked the story and connection to the song but I admit I didn't get the purpose of using parenthesis. At first I thought it was for flashbacks but then it became thoughts.

lunaticmare April 5 2011, 04:30:19 UTC

when I write fic, parenthesis is like part of it. ahaha
I don't know why I like to use it. I'm sorry it confused you. (it confused me too, sometimes)

thanks for your comment

sumrndmgrl April 5 2011, 07:33:21 UTC

It's okay! When i see it, I will know it's yours :)

maia1504 April 5 2011, 19:37:37 UTC

Aww, that's so sad :-(

lunaticmare April 6 2011, 02:53:41 UTC

I can write only sad fic, i guess : (