Comments | lunayeppeo: four shinee shorts

lunayeppeo

four shinee shorts

Jan 17, 2011 13:58

title: you carry my heart
type: flash fiction (679 words)
fandom: shinee
pairing: onkey
rating/warnings: pg
author's notes: 15-minute challenge piece. inspired by this prompt from this challenge post.

( the scariest part in being loved by someone is the uncertainty that they may stop anytime )

pairing: 2min, pairing: ot5, fandom: shinee, pairing: onkey

Comments 20

silentdreamer95 January 17 2011, 23:01:54 UTC

omg so you wrote these!
i adored every single one of them so much sdfjslkdjs
i think my favorites would have to be the road trip from hell and the onkey giving of hearts one but they're all brilliant♥

lunayeppeo January 18 2011, 01:05:48 UTC

fffffff thank you so much ;O; They were all really fun to write, so I'm glad you liked them! \o/

romanticgraze January 18 2011, 01:08:55 UTC

AH the first one. here take mine ♥
ahh the rest are amazing, but the pokemon one hahahahaha.

lunayeppeo January 18 2011, 01:10:18 UTC

;A; But I am incapable of taking care of a heart! /tries to water it

Thank you so much! Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed them. And yeaaaah Pokemon \o/

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lunayeppeo January 18 2011, 08:49:46 UTC

Onew would be a totally adorable Psyduck. ;___________; Fufufu, I'm glad it made you laugh!

What beautiful imagery! Though I do worry a little for your heart. But thank you so much! It was a fun little experiment, and I'm really happy it was so well-received. It's an honor to have it favorited!

And, no, thank you so much for reading! ;o;

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lunayeppeo February 7 2011, 07:32:01 UTC

IT'S A CRITICAL HIT

:<<<< Well, to be fair, I didn't tell anyone~ Also omg you totally posted too without saying anythiiiiiiing

scylladakylla February 16 2011, 12:27:40 UTC

Oh, my mistake, I HAVE read these other ones before, I just didn't recognize them by your descriptions.

I love the first one and how you used the metaphor literally. :3 So adorable, and of course Jinki would have no idea how to take care of a heart, wondering if he should water it daily. And being terrified that Kibum will take his heart back.

I also love how in the 2Min, Minho and Taemin are mysterious, supernatural figures... And Minho needs to use his special powers to help him hyungwhore. I don't even. :|

And fic based off the RDD mv, I love you. Where DID the water come from??

And, of course, the last one. ;-; SHINee as kids playing POKEMON is so adorable it makes my heart hurt. You should clearly write more!

lunayeppeo February 17 2011, 09:13:03 UTC

;A; ♥

I'd wanted to try magic realism, and I'm really glad it turned out well! Jinki and Kibum turned out so adorable somehow. *U*

I don't think I could change that about Minho even if I tried, haha! I really want to expand on it someday, though writing a fantasy AU like this is a little intimidating right now.

I love you toooooo. It is one of the biggest mysteries of life.

SHINee kids are so adorable! All that bickering over who gets to be a trainer and evolutions and potions. ;3;

I can't express how happy I am. Thank you so much! You make my heart hurt. ;_; Acads are a little heavy, but I'll definitely try to write more!