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luvjj

[Fic] Deshabillez-moi

Aug 12, 2009 01:34

Title: Deshabillez-moi (Undress me)
Length: One shot
Word Count: 5206
Genre: Romance
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: Nc-17 but there's a plot.
Warning: Sex with clothes, Seme!Jae but no girly/weak uke!Ho here.

( It was his idea to throw this little party, just between the members and a couple of their old friends. So why was he acting all angry? What with the dark face? Just because they forced Jaejoong into a strip poker? It coudn't be the reason; such a silly little game played between friends couldn't cause such a reaction. Maybe Yunho wasn't confident about his body? He wanted to whisper in his ear not to worry, that he had lost a long time ago his manboobs but the other guys started to get really loud asking him to take off his clothes. )

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dilovesyunjae August 12 2009, 02:40:30 UTC

kyaaaaa.....<3

luvjj August 12 2009, 18:06:44 UTC

you liked it? :D
Thank you for commenting!

krisooh August 12 2009, 02:53:06 UTC

OMG SPOT. Second?
♥

krisooh August 12 2009, 03:01:53 UTC

OH this was just wonnnnnderful -looks at you dreamy- ♥

luvjj August 12 2009, 18:09:17 UTC

kyahahahaaa coming from you I'm even more glad you like it <3

krisooh August 12 2009, 18:36:33 UTC

♥ haha aw! More more more? Hm will there be more darling?

-looks at you eagerly-

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luvjj August 12 2009, 18:11:41 UTC

Hey bb!
I'm glad you liked it. I'm writing a serie actually but I'm not posting anything until I finish it totally and it gets through a beta's hands. I posted this OS to see how it was received and for criticism. Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

lil_stranger August 12 2009, 03:38:10 UTC

wow that was amazing~! it was so well written! i love this side of yunho that we don't get to see often. and lol at jae constantly losing. maybe it WAS planned ;) too bad you left us with a cliffie of jaejoong telling yunho to strip him x)

luvjj August 12 2009, 18:13:50 UTC

Planned? Noooooo not at all ;D
But it was already 10 pages long! (I first I stopped before the smutt but a friend told me to continue so hey this is it!)

Thank you so much for commenting!

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luvjj August 12 2009, 18:15:22 UTC

I'm working on a serie right now but I won't post it until it's totally finished (I would hate to go on hiatus and leaving hanging readers)
Thank you for reading and commenting <3