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luvntrek

Cousin Charlie (Part 4)

Mar 12, 2010 05:14

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yalegirl03 March 13 2010, 02:13:47 UTC

Interesting.

luvntrek March 13 2010, 17:53:57 UTC

Thanks! More to come soon!

shighola March 13 2010, 02:29:23 UTC

With every tidbit I like Charlie less and less. I hope there's an innocent explanation.

luvntrek March 13 2010, 17:53:28 UTC

Things are not always as they appear. Nyota mistook what Hailey said. She called him 'the man' and not 'her man'
More to come soon!

shighola March 13 2010, 18:03:29 UTC

No, I caught Nyota's mistake and I'm sure it's not what it appears, but Charlie rubs me the wrong way.

luvntrek March 13 2010, 18:45:53 UTC

Hee hee! He has the same effect on Spock! More to come soon!

riiya March 13 2010, 02:57:37 UTC

my first thought when she said 'she's been with Charlie ten years' is that she meant 'joining Charlie the Band' ...not 'dating Charlie the man'..a 13 years joining a band...it happens
.so could this be just a misunderstanding?

luvntrek March 13 2010, 17:55:06 UTC

Yes, it's not as bad as it appears....
More to come soon!

kayekaye1 March 13 2010, 03:30:24 UTC

Oh, the plot doth thicken! LOL!!! BTW, I forgot to mention that I love the pics you've chosen to accompany this fic!

luvntrek March 13 2010, 17:56:02 UTC

Thanks! Yes the plot does thicken and misunderstand abounds! More to come soon!

new_hillbilly March 13 2010, 04:07:06 UTC

My goodness--this story is getting more and more interesting! I thought Charlie was going to be purely a plot device to get Spock jealous, but I can see you are a more sophisticated writer that than. Can't wait for the next chapter!