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BPS Drabble Challenge: "Transformation"

Dec 11, 2011 02:12

Title: "Transformation"
Author:luvvycat
Characters: James Norrington, Weatherby Swann, Elizabeth Swann
Rating: G
BPS Prompt: Wonder
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: PotC is Disney's, not mine. *sniff*

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james norrington, potc, elizabeth swann, fanfic, weatherby swann, drabble

Comments 15

geekmama December 11 2011, 20:52:33 UTC

That's a lovely description of young Elizabeth, and of course James would be instantly smitten. A wonderful holiday scene brought to life in a hundred words. Brilliant, as always.

luvvycat December 18 2011, 09:06:08 UTC

That's a lovely description of young Elizabeth

It was fun, showing the transformed Elizabeth through James' love-struck eyes. Clearly, behind that cool Norrington exterior beats the heart of a romantic! ;-)

and of course James would be instantly smitten.

And, no doubt, shocked down to his impeccably-polished boots to discover the little girl he'd known had grown into such a fine and lovely young woman while he'd been away!

A wonderful holiday scene brought to life in a hundred words. Brilliant, as always.

And, as always, you're very kind to say so! In truth, I've had something like this drabble in mind for a while; I guess I was just waiting for the right prompt to trigger the proper "inspiration". (And thank you so much for providing it!) ;-)

Again, thank you so much for reading, and for your heart-warming Comments! There's no better holiday gift than that! :-)

-- Cat

honorat December 11 2011, 21:38:51 UTC

Such a lovely elegant picture you paint. Elizabeth grown into a vision of loveliness and James like a moth to her flame. Beautiful.

luvvycat December 18 2011, 09:15:21 UTC

Such a lovely elegant picture you paint... Beautiful.

Thank you! :-)

Elizabeth grown into a vision of loveliness and James like a moth to her flame.

And a very surprised and lovestruck moth at that! Poor James. He had no idea then what the future (and T&T) had in store for him! ;-)

Thank you so much for reading, and for your quite lovely Comments! :-)

-- Cat

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luvvycat December 18 2011, 09:23:32 UTC

That was beautiful. So heartwarming.

Thank you! :-) :-) :-)

Such a bitter-sweet what-might-have-been *sigh*

Ah, yes ... poor, star-crossed James! *sniffle* If he only knew then that no happy future with Elizabeth awaited him, it might have saved him a ton of grief. (Darn T&T, for making him suffer so!)

Fantastic drabble! ♥

I'm so happy you think so! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and were moved to Comment! :-)

-- Cat