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[lye]

Pairing(s) in the story: George Harrison/John Lennon
Author Name/Pen Name: Lye
Author LJ Name: lyeTitle of story: In The Philippines

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[749_penny_lane]

The door in the next room slammed open and they sprung apart, catching their breath as they waited for whomever it was to enter, eyes locked on each other and hearts thumping dangerously fast. Neil walked in, followed by Paul, followed by a bunch of security that were harping on them for going missing or something. John wiped his lips on the back of his hand, George grinned, and when Paul asked “What?” they both answered simultaneously with, “Nothing!”

Very nice paragraph. Good example of what's really good about your story. Felt very real, very in touch with what they would feel and do.

They stared at each other a moment before John groused. “I should kill him.” He placed his hands on Georges face and pecked his lips quickly. “I should just bloody kill him.” He adjusted his pants and gave George a grin before letting himself out of the room.

Very good voice of John. I thought your characterizations were well done. Nice to see a George not afraid to take the intitiative.

I hope to see lots more from you on lennonharrison!

[lye]

Thank you so much. I try not to make them act too outrageously out of character (aside from all the manloving, which might not be outrageous at all).

I worry most about the John voice, so I'm glad you thought it was good. I do so love initiative George.

I hope to kick around here for a while!

[walkaway_girl]

GUSH. I love a confused!John. I love the ending especially... holding his wrist. Nee! :3

[lye]

Haha! Don't you just want to pet him? And other things, of course. Glad you liked it!

[anonymous]

Oh My GOD! i loove this story! Great job!!!

[lye]

Thank you! :*

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

I really, really, REALLY enjoyed this!

Very hot and very well written!

THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY DAY!

[lye]

Thank you for reading it and making mine!

[andsoshewrites]

So I'm not a fan of George/John, but I decided to read this anyway.
I loved it<3
This was written very well, and I adore your John voice.

[lye]

Aw, thank you for giving it a chance! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.