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[lye]

Pairing(s) in the story: John Lennon/George Harrison
Author Name/Pen Name: Lye
Author LJ Name: lyeTitle of story: Busy Hands

Comments

[cholera_jasna]

I think the ending is just right :D
I hope you're gonna write more.
Oh, and good luck ;)

[lye]

I'm glad you think so! It feels a little.. I don't know. But if you're satisfied then I am!

Thanks!

[magegirl8]

Damn. This was a good ending. I love how it turns out John remembered after all -this was really hot.

...but if you feel like writing more, i'll be MORE than happy to read it.

[lye]

Thank you! I wanted them to get it on, actually, but I feel like it would have been pretty sudden. Sigh!

[magegirl8]

Hmm. I see what you mean... Well, I think you did right with the ending you made - it felt very natural. I say this calls for a sequel, one that isn't set Immediately after this one's end, but a short time after - and can maybe involve them trying to get time to sleep together for the first time, but always being interrupted, or distracted, or there not being enough room...... That might be fun. and wait, even better- Maybe George worrying about keeping the new relationship secret, what with John's 'busy hands' always on the verge of giving them away... Tee hee, I should stop before I bloody write the fic in this comment space... so anyway... good luck with your move! and Thanks again for the riveting read. *leers*

[lye]

Haha, you are so inspiring! Those are lovely ideas, I may have to steal some once I'm all settled. Or better yet, you could write it!

Thank you so much for all the feedback, it definitely makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.

[walkaway_girl]

Glee!

I love that ending... and I thought the interaction was exciting and realistic. Gah, amazing. Two thumbs up! d(@__@)b

[lye]

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing it, so I'm glad you enjoyed.

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

I was not disapointed! It was a cute ending :]

I really enjoyed this fic! Thanks for posting it!

[lye]

I'm so glad you weren't disappointed!

Thank you for reading :D

[lye]

Thank you so much! I hope to see more from you, too :D