LJ Idol Week 14- The Place That Can Not Be

Feb 11, 2010 23:12

“Hey baby.

Hey love. Happy Valentines Day.

The same to you, darling. I wish you were here.

Me too, babe, me too. I know we talk every night, but tonight I really want to say something.

Go ahead. I wanted to say how much I miss you. Everyone gets to hold their husbands hand.
Me? I just have to pretend like you would be holding it if you were ( Read more... )

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lostin_thestars February 12 2010, 17:41:10 UTC
Beautiful, and so very poignant.

Once again, your writing takes my breath away.

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plastrickland23 February 12 2010, 22:36:19 UTC
Sad, but so well done. I love the he said/she said style. I love the way the little son was slipped in there. Nice. P.

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beautyofgrey February 13 2010, 01:39:39 UTC
Wow. How well done.

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agirlnamedluna February 13 2010, 19:24:00 UTC
I knew he was dead from the start (call it precognition LOL) but this was extremely heartfelt and well written.

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onda_bianca February 13 2010, 20:13:17 UTC
Wow, what a sad situation...makes one want to hug those close to them tight!

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