LJ Idol Week 14- The Place That Can Not Be

[lyrical_liessss]

“Hey baby.

Hey love. Happy Valentines Day.

The same to you, darling. I wish you were here.

Me too, babe, me too. I know we talk every night, but tonight I really want to say something.

Go ahead. I wanted to say how much I miss you. Everyone gets to hold their husbands hand.
Me? I just have to pretend like you would be holding it if you were

Comments

[myscribbles]

Sad, but wonderfully done, the lead in gives the reader no clues which makes the piece all the more powerful.

[roina_arwen]

Awww - sad but lovely.

[teaberryblue]

Team Zia_Machine (Or Hug_Narratora) would like to wish you the happiest Valentine's Day!

[lyrical_liessss]

Awwww hahahah I love it!

[pixiebelle]

That was wonderful. I have tears in my eyes from this. Great job. I think you hit this right on the nail. As someone who lost their dad when they were young, I can really relate to some of this...

[mstrobel]

Oh God, that really packed a punch. Amazing.