Drowning

[m00bs]

Title:  Drowning
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: NC-17
Warning: sex, nothing too explicit
Summary:  When they finally break apart, Jinki gasps for air, coughing as it fills his lungs. Kissing Kibum is like drowning, and that thought doesn't frighten him nearly as much as it should.
a/n: this was kinda for that itune meme thing so the ending came out abrupt

Comments

[anoukinparis]

gorgeous. loved it all, but especially this line for some reason:

Jinki nods, and Kibum kisses him, holding his head still in his damp hands. His mouth opens and when Jinki licks inside, he tastes like the lake, cold and lonely

realistic but poetic at the same time, that's the best way i can describe it, and it's lovely :)

[m00bs]

I guess you could say Kibum is having an affair. xD My purpose was that he was supposed to be with Jonghyun, but wants to be with Jinki again (Jinki being his ex and, although I failed at showing it, it didn't end well, presumably with Kibum cheating on Jinki with Jonghyun).

[bree_nd]

I'm not really getting it. I understood it as Key cheated on Jinki by going with Jonghyun and then cheated on Jonghyun by going back to Jinki?

Love your writing though! Please keep writing!

[m00bs]

That's pretty much it. xD

[dndr310]

i loved this! xD
so hot yet cute yet touching!
thanks for sharing :)

[namae_nai]

beautiful, just beaituful. it sounds so desperate though, it hurts. catch-22.

[mayzeeacala]

I cant describe its like I cant picture it in my head clearly and it made me sad that jjong was in the picture. sorry I guess im being stupid