Weeks

Apr 20, 2010 21:27

Title: Weeks
Paring: Taemin/Onew, Jonghyun/Onew
Rating: PG
Summary: The first time it dawns on Jinki that he's going to spend the rest of his life with Taemin, it's a Sunday.
a/n: okay--i have a 200 pt. assignment due in a month and this is how i don't do it. ♥ well, i was doing both. but mostly this. ♥

On Saturday, Taemin tells Jinki he can't dance. )

pairing: onew/jonghyun, rating: pg, pairing: onew/taemin

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ex_argh May 6 2010, 06:20:18 UTC
I really really like this! ♥ I love how each segment follows a day 8D and yeah. Its kinda sad but its also sweet and cute and just really lovely. ♥

:D going to mem this^^;; and Taemin ♥ is so forgiving :DDD
(andddd good luck for your homework D: ♥) :D

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salted_taiyaki May 6 2010, 10:45:40 UTC
ah spot spot *A* ontae?! (and, well, jongyu too ♥) i cannot wait to readddd
esp. since you say there's no angst aha

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salted_taiyaki May 7 2010, 01:51:28 UTC
Because he smelled like strawberry, which reminded me of Kibum and what happened in the locker room during 6th grade. And then he smiled, just like Minho used to before he left me for that Thai guy. He laughed the same laugh Taeyeon used to have before she realized Tiffany was the only one for her. And he told me how funny I was, just like Kyuhyun used to before he went back to Busan and Donghae. And then

oh god that kinda crushed my heart, jinki why are you so lkjsdf sobsob

i'm really, really glad that there was a happy ending for these two, ha ha (since they're, like, my otp now--i think i might love them a bit more than jongkey, shockingly). gosh, the bumps they endure--you portrayed such a lovely, realistic relationship in their words and actions, especially. nothing's ever perfect, and you showed that through their love for each other, how they made it through, together. bah ♥ taemin was so unbelievably sweet, honestly. sigh.

thank you for sharing this lovely piece of ontae ♥♥

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chinagirl4evr May 6 2010, 14:09:22 UTC
Aw, that was amazing. My OTP and my second favorite pairing together. I am glad that Taemin forgave Jinki :)

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volatileflame May 6 2010, 14:32:49 UTC
aww~ i really liked this : )

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leemeilin May 6 2010, 14:56:00 UTC
This is wonderful. I really loved it! ♥

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