The creek don't rise

Jan 21, 2020 14:14

Here we are at Mueller's Creek. Are you sure boy? You want to shoot it out with a known killer like me because of words ( Read more... )

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m_malcontent January 22 2020, 14:29:32 UTC
I'm aware guys that this is quite weak it was meant just to be an idea of starting off point and I thought I had time to work on it some more but my mom has been ill.

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roina_arwen January 25 2020, 19:22:01 UTC
I hope your mom is doing better. This was a decent vignette, all things considered.

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kittenboo January 23 2020, 02:51:10 UTC
I actually like the concept and the reveal at the end!

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karmasoup January 24 2020, 07:24:42 UTC
Any encounter you can walk away from is a good result.

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adoptedwriter January 24 2020, 15:06:46 UTC

Best to your mom! You’ve got something to add onto for another prompt.

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alycewilson January 24 2020, 23:04:26 UTC
Clever!

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