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Bad, bad friends and their addictive memes!
May 27, 2004 21:21
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Evil addictive memes!
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bottleofred
May 27 2004, 15:27:50 UTC
First glance editorial (no more; I'm tired):
"In shared jubilee" => "In shared jubilation"
Pugs => Pugg's
[Uncertain about whether to keep following sentence] ?
Will the Buffy/Southpark/Balding Wookie references over-alienate the audience?
They _didn't_ shag, did they? It's a little unclear. In any case: a sober person sleeping with a bra on is unlikely.
-BoR
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"In shared jubilee" => "In shared jubilation"
Pugs => Pugg's
[Uncertain about whether to keep following sentence] ?
Will the Buffy/Southpark/Balding Wookie references over-alienate the audience?
They _didn't_ shag, did they? It's a little unclear. In any case: a sober person sleeping with a bra on is unlikely.
-BoR
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