Right now you’re alive, I love you, and I need you inside me right the hell now, you got it?”
Ah, so the mystery is solved. Cain is a boxers man. He was never one to waste time either. Hehehe.
Wow. You didn't even have any authour's notes before this one. Just got right down to business, didntcha? I'm gonna have to read this chapter again several times. To check for spelling and grammar mistakes. Yeah...that's why. Teehee!
That was beyond hot. It was deeply erotic and highly emotional.
I love your descriptions, I really do. Incredible. I may be bowing out of the fanfic business now. Not much can top this whole story.
My inner smutpuppy was disappointed, however. That wasn't smut. That was art in disguise.
After all the lovely erotica, we get the push back to reality. But DG's admission of trust with her calling him on the lies had it's own emotional punch.
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THAT WAS HOTTTTTT!!!!!!!
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Ah, so the mystery is solved. Cain is a boxers man. He was never one to waste time either. Hehehe.
Wow. You didn't even have any authour's notes before this one. Just got right down to business, didntcha? I'm gonna have to read this chapter again several times. To check for spelling and grammar mistakes. Yeah...that's why. Teehee!
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I love your descriptions, I really do. Incredible. I may be bowing out of the fanfic business now. Not much can top this whole story.
My inner smutpuppy was disappointed, however. That wasn't smut. That was art in disguise.
After all the lovely erotica, we get the push back to reality. But DG's admission of trust with her calling him on the lies had it's own emotional punch.
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