That night it so happened....

Dec 15, 2016 01:38


It was going to be a white Christmas this time. The snowman stared back at Jamie with a twinkle in his eyes. Jamie shared a wicked grin with his lone companion of the night; peering at his handiwork through his bedroom window sill. The pathway was brightly lit with Christmas fairy-lights. Yet, he didn’t see anyone enter.

Maybe he had dozed off, when ( Read more... )

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rayaso December 15 2016, 14:05:37 UTC
I love the way you melded Christmas and baseball into this story, and updated Rudolph and the sleigh. It was very imaginative! Excellent job.

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magazhchi December 16 2016, 17:11:40 UTC

Thank you kindly *smiles* Happy to know that you enjoyed reading this.

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eeyore_grrl December 18 2016, 22:48:29 UTC
agreed. this was nice to read. :D

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magazhchi December 19 2016, 19:02:09 UTC

Thanks! *smiles*

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penpusher December 16 2016, 07:57:51 UTC
A really sweet and nicely fitted to the prompt Christmas story! You even got the "put an eye out" in there!

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magazhchi December 16 2016, 17:15:45 UTC

Thanks! Happy to know it worked. *smiles* Your icon is perfect for this story.

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lostin_thestars December 16 2016, 20:58:46 UTC
Adorable :)

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magazhchi December 18 2016, 06:13:38 UTC

Thanks! *smiles*

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ryl December 17 2016, 14:13:57 UTC
I love this, especially the wise, fatherly Santa.

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magazhchi December 18 2016, 06:15:27 UTC

Thank you kindly. Happy to know that those characteristic came out.

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halfshellvenus December 19 2016, 00:49:19 UTC
What a neat Christmas story! I liked the updated Santa, just a little different enough that we couldn't entirely be sure about him until the very end. :)

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magazhchi December 19 2016, 19:01:17 UTC

Thank you kindly. That's what I was aiming for and I am happy to know that it worked. *smiles*

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