Comments | magenta_girl: LJ Idol Week 3

magenta_girl

Mar 31, 2014 08:00

In Another Castle ( Read more... )

Comments 33

whipchick April 1 2014, 00:14:31 UTC

You really capture the husband's puzzled, searching voice.

magenta_girl April 1 2014, 00:19:38 UTC

Thank you!

sweeny_todd April 1 2014, 04:14:42 UTC

That was fantastic train of thought... the jumping all over, stress reaction.

magenta_girl April 1 2014, 04:15:44 UTC

Thank you!

beautyofgrey April 1 2014, 12:53:52 UTC

This is chilling, and yet... so very plausible. Well done on a unique take on the prompt!

magenta_girl April 1 2014, 12:57:01 UTC

Thank you!

tatdatcm April 2 2014, 05:04:19 UTC

This has a rambling, jumbled feel to it that makes it more real.

Interesting use of the prompt.

magenta_girl April 2 2014, 10:36:11 UTC

Thank you.

n3m3sis43 April 2 2014, 11:55:01 UTC

You did a really good job of developing the narrator's perspective and situation. Poor guy (girl?).

magenta_girl April 2 2014, 12:23:14 UTC

Thank you!