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Fic: It Started With A Kiss (Torchwood Jack/Ianto NC17)

May 19, 2011 09:40

Title: It Started With A Kiss
Author: magikalrhiannon
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: Season 2 Episode 3 To The Last Man
Summary: What happened that night after the kiss in Jack's office?
Word Count: 2316
Disclaimer: All rights belong to BBC and Russell T Davies. I'm just finger-painting in someone else's masterpiece. No infringement ( Read more... )

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Comments 39

evalentine99 May 19 2011, 01:04:48 UTC

Another briliant short story from yuor hand. wow.

I just love your work!

magikalrhiannon May 19 2011, 02:05:48 UTC

Thank you darling! :)

milady_dragon May 19 2011, 01:48:13 UTC

That was gorgeous. Just fantastic.

magikalrhiannon May 19 2011, 02:18:03 UTC

Thank you so much :)

excentric397 May 19 2011, 01:58:01 UTC

I liked this. A strong Ianto is always a good thing. Thank you.

magikalrhiannon May 19 2011, 02:19:24 UTC

I do love a strong Ianto, too :)
Thank you!

zazajb May 19 2011, 07:02:06 UTC

Totally and utterly gorgeous *happy sigh*
Thank you for a fab start to my day and a guaranteed dreamy smile on my face... *hugs* xxx

magikalrhiannon May 19 2011, 07:09:09 UTC

Hehee! You are most welcome! :)
Thank you for reading and replying!

Thank You! comicinks May 19 2011, 07:32:51 UTC

OMG. That was a good fic, as usual, but that's not why OMG or the thank you. Let me just tell you! This:

“I -” Ianto turned and sat down on the edge of Jack's desk. It was on the tip of his tongue to tell Jack that he belonged here with him. But they hadn't gotten back there yet. “Don’t you get lonely?”

I love you. Know why? You typed the quote "I - Don't you get lonely?" Which is correct. Whereas everyone else in the universe wants to make it one sentence. Namely I - know you get lonely. NO! That's wrong! I says don't! He just changes gears! Damn it people! Ok. I am done. I was reading up to that point and I was prepared to cringe, thank you for avoiding one of my greatest Janto pet peeves. I am going to bed. Goodnight. :p

Re: Thank You! magikalrhiannon May 19 2011, 07:49:10 UTC

*grin*

Do you know how many times I watched that scene over and over again, to get the placement and the movements and the descriptions right? Not that it was a hardship, hey! But he clearly says what I put in the fic, so...
People get it wrong? :s you know how pedantic I am about getting it right if its canon! Canon Nazi! Omg I totally need that in an icon! Or Canon Queen.

Anyway! I'm glad it pleased you! :)