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Harry Potter - "Venus & Adonis" - Part 2 - Oliver/McGonagall - NC-17

Jan 30, 2007 22:10

Title: Venus & Adonis
Author: marseverlasting
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Oliver/McGonagall
Word Count: 14,320 words
Summary: Minerva McGonagall comes to England to care for her ailing sister, and finds something so much more. A lesson in growth for one, and pleasure for the other.
Warnings: Age disparity like whoa. Oliver is jailbait, and McGonagall is a total cougar ( Read more... )

harry potter, het, oliver/mcgonagall

Comments 4

orpheus_samhain October 5 2007, 21:08:57 UTC

I've read your fic at merry_smutmas and enjoyed it very much. It's delicious. Somehow I failed to comment there so I'm doing it now. Excellent writing :)

orpheus_samhain October 5 2007, 21:09:51 UTC

oh, it was smutty_claus *g*

blacksquirrel June 19 2008, 04:25:47 UTC

Oh. Oh my. Well done

ms_worplesdon September 20 2008, 07:59:07 UTC

Okay. Okay. Let's be honest. I could not resist the cross-possibly multigen of the this pairing. So I read it.

Despite...despite the fact that I'm up way past my bedtime, and should be writing fic if I am, in fact, up this late...

Nothing I say here can do this justice. I am simply too tired. However...yes, crows feet are evidence of happiness and all should embrace them. It is heartening to see a (relatively) young man do so. *applauds*

This omniscient POV. Completely inspiring and wonderful. Refreshing, in fact. Reminds me of things I can't put my finger on because it's late, etc. All I can say is this...you're a lovely writer and I'm so very pleased to have been matched to you for an exchange so that I would meet you.

As for the sex, well. Minerva felt utterly real. As did Oliver. How on earth did you make this plausible and stimulating? Simply amazing. And having read next to no het, I must say that this was- wow. Suffice it to say that your scenes are very...inspirational. Yes ( ... )