Comments | magser: What Might Have Been Been pt 4

magser

What Might Have Been Been pt 4

Feb 25, 2009 02:49

( part 4 )

Comments 88

nascentproselyt February 25 2009, 02:56:13 UTC

I simply adore this fic. We’ve already covered the fact that me liking to see the guys in such angst and pain probably means I have some deep-seated issues...but I think it’s brilliant. I’m so happy for you that you just let your writing flow and so proud that you actually posted it. LOVE IT!

magser February 25 2009, 03:03:18 UTC

Thank you! And thank you for encouraging me to be brave enough not to change it!

blackpanther07 February 25 2009, 03:01:18 UTC

Oh god, that so did not end the way I thought it would. Heartbreaking, beautiful.

magser February 25 2009, 03:02:50 UTC

Phew!! You think its alright???I tried so hard to make it a happy ending but Jared just stepped out in front of that car.....Im so dead when di catches me!

blackpanther07 February 25 2009, 03:07:25 UTC

I think it is perfect! This one was suppose to end sad.
I thought it would end with them not getting together and one or the other commiting suicide and the other following as soon as they found out.
Your way was MUCH better. Much more of a jolt.

magser February 25 2009, 03:09:03 UTC

Thank god! I'm totally hiding behind you when she finds out though!

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la_bellavita February 25 2009, 03:15:19 UTC

sob! i dont know why i thought its end happy. loved it. but gosh! i need to read something happy now lol.

magser February 25 2009, 03:16:37 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment! So pleased you enjoyed it!

2sexyboys February 25 2009, 03:19:31 UTC

Oh damn...you didn't. D is going to throw you under Jared's killer car for that LOL Wonderful sad and I wanted a happy ending, but we don't always get what we want. Me thinks that Jensen will blame himself for all of this and will never be the same :( I don't see him surviving this accident either :( :(

magser February 25 2009, 03:21:03 UTC

Can I hide with you tomorrow? She is going to murder me....but on the bright side it got me out of my slump.....thats a good thing...right? right?

2sexyboys February 25 2009, 03:46:04 UTC

Of course you can. Though I think she will still be able to hunt you down and yes, wonderful you are writing again...and very good you killed Jared and not Jensen :) So you are good with me.... But D...well, to whom do I forward posthumous feedback?

garvaldmains February 25 2009, 07:06:12 UTC

I'm watching....

I see all...

I know your address Mags....

Dx

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magser February 25 2009, 09:04:05 UTC

Thank you so much!
Sometimes the warnings can give the whoe game away and I really didn't want to do that,but I had to with this one....