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[mahochan_fanfic]

Confessions
A Hana Yori Dango Fanfiction
By Maho-chan

Comments

[mizy]

Tsukasa's smarter than he looks, ne? :D

“Because we are too different. You are too tall. We fight too much. And I think you are crazy. I-I don’t date crazy guys!” Tsukushi stammered.

I think the above was my favourite line. Particularly because this issue comes to me more often than it should.

You captured Tsukushi's irritation quite well. Props to Tsukasa for putting up with her nonsense. I'm glad you did include the part of her daydreaming about him because if she hadn't, she'd more likely be feeling revulsion. The way you put it, the story makes more sense, on the psychological level.

[mahochan_fanfic]

Thank you Mizy! :)