SGA fic: Flinch

[maisierita]

So, okay.  Last story I published was practically a year ago.  And after months and months of opening up the monster story, staring miserably at it, and not writing a word, I decided I'd better force myself into doing something or I'd never write again.  Thus my 200 word a day challenge to myself, which has netted me almost 24,000 words of new fic

Comments

[lil_aber_lisa]

i absolutely loved this, ive not seen many fics where john and rodney dont become a couple and i thankyou for that

keep writing ^_^

lil lisa

[maisierita]

You're very welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[luthien]

Oh, this hurt so badly. You write the dialogue and the emotions so well, so realistically. The bit that ended up hurting me the most was right near the end, where Rodney asks why John falls for the straight guy, and they *almost* fall back into one of their typical conversational patterns - except not quite, and that makes all the difference in the world. Their relationship is all broken. :-(

Thanks, though. I love stories that make the emotions feel strong and real.

[maisierita]

Thank you so much! You got exactly what I wanted to convey ... Rodney's trying, but it's just not going to be the same ever again. :(

[maisierita]

Lovely compliments, thanks!

[shadowserenity]

Ouch. There aren't enough one-sided McKay/Sheppard stories, so I was pleased to see this one on my flist :). Great prose.

[maisierita]

Oh, thank you! What a nice compliment!

[brandinsbabe]

oh my lord. this left me in tears! but it was wonderful. and so painfully real. so glad you decided to write again. this was amazing.

[maisierita]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.