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Laws of Attraction - Chapter Forty-One: The Long and Winding Road

Aug 15, 2012 19:16

Title: Laws of Attraction
Author: Major Roon
Fandom: The Closer
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: NC-17/M

( Chapter Forty-One: The Long and Winding Road )

laws of attraction, the closer

Comments 5

somniesperus August 15 2012, 19:34:27 UTC

I can't believe I'm saying this in a comment on Laws of Attraction, but: awww. That was really sweet. I'm glad Sharon had her breakthrough and I hope she can come to terms with it eventually. And hooray for Brenda finally saying...sort of...almost the right thing!

a_proposito August 15 2012, 20:17:44 UTC

i really really love it when they talk and even more so when they have a genuine conversation. and i loved Brenda putting aside her 'dumb blond' act and making an effort to understand what's going on with her Captain. that was actually sweet! and a nice foreplay:))

marvellous chapter, as always, thank you! please, update soon!

sitcomgirl90 August 15 2012, 20:29:33 UTC

I love this fic! This chapter was surprising and lovely!

sisterbiscuit August 16 2012, 02:33:39 UTC

I was thinking I could really use a new chapter of a well-loved fic today, and you delivered.

This was so sweet and such a nice, revealing follow-up to the heat of the prior chapter. It is nice when they converse and connect on an emotional level.

You always out-do yourself with each chapter, and this is no different.

Thanks for sharing - and continuing to write on this amazing story!

tayryn August 21 2012, 23:51:17 UTC

“I hope that don’t mean we can’t hate each other at work anymore,” Brenda interjected quickly.

“God no,” Sharon shook her head furiously. “I love it.”

I love this exchange... this bit, and the bit just before.

“People are who they are...they seldom change.”

Amen.

The brunette’s features relaxed a bit and she gave Brenda a look that she had not yet seen on her Captain’s face, a look of respect, of acceptance and admiration.

I like this... that Brenda was able to see this on Sharon's face. I was glad it was on Sharon's face to be seen.

Sharon looked coy, Brenda thought, yet bemused at the same time and the blonde felt a tingle in her chest at having elicited those feelings. She felt a smile tug at the corner of her lips as she scooted closer even and, with a challengingly raised eyebrow, straddled Sharon’s lap. I would like to straddle Sharon myself. *G ( ... )