Unthinking (Joick; R)

[make_love_last]

She smiles at him, her face tired, and he ducks his head down and looks at the floor. He’s fidgeting with the hem of his T-shirt like he always does when he’s upset. His mommy calls his name, softly beckoning him closer. “Joseph, come here and meet your new brother,” she tells him gently.

He finally plucks up the courage to take the three steps

Comments

[raelouise]

Love this, love how it tracked their relationship and I also really love the last line though I can't be sure as to why entirely.

[make_love_last]

Thanks! :)

[ohmyjumbie]

"he doesn’t even notice Kevin straining to see the baby" that part made me grin.
wow. I love this. Specially the part were Joe is going to his first day at kindergarden and how you made the Joe at seventeen part like that he suddenly realize he is staring at his brother and when he is blushing. And when they start kissing for real <3 how you made that part is awesome.

"“Fuck I’ve wanted to do this for so long,” Nick mumbles" looove that! : D

[make_love_last]

haha thanks. :)

I just kind of see their relationship as something that kind of grew over time and then one day it was just like BAM I'm attracted to my brother. lol

[farewells]

really good! omggg their mom caught them. i cringed!

Joe decides that maybe Nick curses sometimes

i love that line so much

[make_love_last]

Haha there are so many fics about them getting it on at home or in a hotel room where, really, the walls are like paper thin, so i've always thought it was really unrealistic how they never got caught. lol i figured two teenage boys aren't very discreet when it comes to things like this.

glad you liked it! :)

[severus_falter]

The cuteness overwhelms me. I mean. That's just it. They're fucking soul mates. That's all there is to it, and I don't believe anything differently. And oh, Denise, I kinda <3 you a little.

And boys, for the love of god, just be together; stay TOGETHER.

[make_love_last]

IKR? I just want them to freaking admit to it. Haha 'Fess up, boys!

:) Denise seems like the kind of mom who would be all "Eff this, I'm leaving" if she ever caught them in a situation like that. Totally non confrontational.

Glad you liked it!

[slowwdownsugar]

Wow this is one of the best fics I've read in a really long time. I loved how it showed their relationship building up from the very beginning. And it was all done so well, and so realistically. I even teared up at a few parts.

It was absolutely perfect<3 Great job =]

[make_love_last]

:D Wow, thanks so much! That just made me smile real wide.