Unthinking (Joick; R)

[make_love_last]

She smiles at him, her face tired, and he ducks his head down and looks at the floor. He’s fidgeting with the hem of his T-shirt like he always does when he’s upset. His mommy calls his name, softly beckoning him closer. “Joseph, come here and meet your new brother,” she tells him gently.

He finally plucks up the courage to take the three steps

Comments

[killer_fiend]

Love Love Love everything about this. How much these boys depend on one another and totally and completely love each other.

The hospital scene about killed me.

[make_love_last]

Aww, thanks. :)

I was a little nervous about writing the hospital part at first, like I was afraid it wouldn't come out right or something. But I guess I pulled it off. Haha

[make_love_last]

Thanks. :)

Haha yeah. I'm still new to writing slashy stuff, so I keep cutting it off for now or leaving it open ended until i get more comfortable with writing it.

[make_love_last]

I was just reading through comments on a break from hw and you just made me smile real wide. Haha

Thanks!

[make_love_last]

:) I love getting prompts from other people. That way I can start totally from scratch. So if you have any ideas, go for it and let me know. Haha

[make_love_last]

Haha I'm so open to ideas it's ridiculous. If you think of anything good, just let me know and I'll add it to my list. :)