title = "sweet child of mine"

[maki_poet]

come here little child

Comments

[crisc13]

wow. awesome poem. i envy your conciseness and imagination. and im not just saying that cause i love you =)

[xrayginghamdres]

come here little child
let me crush you're bones,
grind them into dust.

great visuals!
stellar poem as a whole!
hot woman!

[chillyourdill69]

i thought that was a touching poem. it seemed like you really wrote it with passion. now let me read the nest poem

-dean