yay! i love this chapter! the way this arc wrapped up was very... satisfying, since we got a lot of answers concerning the per gathas and how 'magic' works, and a direction for where the plot would be heading (everything's so much clearer when you know who/what/where the bad guys are :P) plus, i love dialogue, so this chapter was right up my alley
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I liked the conclusion to this arc, which explains what has been going on with the dog-headed people chasing Ryou around. I really love that you are writing a story that sounds so much as "The Source of All Things" - all these crazy multidimensional magians and creatures the size of China floating around...
Every few weeks would be lovely, that way we have no time to really disconnect from the story, although to tell you the truth, that has never happened yet. Some stories, if the authors stop writing for too long, I lose interest, life goes out of the story for me, but this never happened with you.
Immediate thought: NooOOOooOooo, I want there to be more! Next thought: But next arc! Next arc, things happening, forward momentum yes!
If you don't have other reasons for waiting to post all at once, then I say post 'em as you got 'em. I do love getting things all at once, but I love savoring and lingering more, and getting it in smaller batches is more conducive to that. With a series of oneshots, the story structure also supports it.
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Every few weeks would be lovely, that way we have no time to really disconnect from the story, although to tell you the truth, that has never happened yet. Some stories, if the authors stop writing for too long, I lose interest, life goes out of the story for me, but this never happened with you.
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Instant gratification is what I'm all about.
-- Guile
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Immediate thought: NooOOOooOooo, I want there to be more!
Next thought: But next arc! Next arc, things happening, forward momentum yes!
If you don't have other reasons for waiting to post all at once, then I say post 'em as you got 'em. I do love getting things all at once, but I love savoring and lingering more, and getting it in smaller batches is more conducive to that. With a series of oneshots, the story structure also supports it.
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Thanks you for writing a beautiful story ^^!
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