Original fiction: Outlands. Sons of the Path arc, part 6

Aug 01, 2010 14:05

I managed to squeeze this out, go me. Being on holiday undoubtedly helped. Thanks for all the encouraging reviews and typo-spotting!

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ex_sasukich August 2 2010, 02:31:21 UTC
yay! i love this chapter! the way this arc wrapped up was very... satisfying, since we got a lot of answers concerning the per gathas and how 'magic' works, and a direction for where the plot would be heading (everything's so much clearer when you know who/what/where the bad guys are :P) plus, i love dialogue, so this chapter was right up my alley ( ... )

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sarcastic666 August 7 2010, 03:22:07 UTC
i second the school crunch time dilemma. please spoil us, mal! i have no quarry w/ waiting.

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alicebs August 2 2010, 17:26:03 UTC
I liked the conclusion to this arc, which explains what has been going on with the dog-headed people chasing Ryou around. I really love that you are writing a story that sounds so much as "The Source of All Things" - all these crazy multidimensional magians and creatures the size of China floating around...

Every few weeks would be lovely, that way we have no time to really disconnect from the story, although to tell you the truth, that has never happened yet. Some stories, if the authors stop writing for too long, I lose interest, life goes out of the story for me, but this never happened with you.

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anonymous August 2 2010, 20:11:03 UTC
Post 'em!

Instant gratification is what I'm all about.

-- Guile

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szzzt August 3 2010, 06:12:36 UTC
End of the current arc

Immediate thought: NooOOOooOooo, I want there to be more!
Next thought: But next arc! Next arc, things happening, forward momentum yes!

If you don't have other reasons for waiting to post all at once, then I say post 'em as you got 'em. I do love getting things all at once, but I love savoring and lingering more, and getting it in smaller batches is more conducive to that. With a series of oneshots, the story structure also supports it.

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elezbed August 3 2010, 18:40:33 UTC
Well I love this chapter and if the other arc is made of oneshots... POST THEM!!!
Thanks you for writing a beautiful story ^^!

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