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Afterwards Chapter - 5

Oct 13, 2006 16:25

Title: Afterwards - Chapter 5

Author: Jhaylin

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Harry/Draco

Words: 1542

Warnings: Slash (duh!), past mpreg implied, mpreg.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Property of JK Rowling.

Author’s note: It has been a while since I updated, but don't worry, I haven't forgotten. I'm just really slow and a total procrastinator.

Summary: Harry and Draco ( Read more... )

h/d, mpreg

Comments 26

ivichsartre October 12 2006, 23:45:35 UTC

OH my frigging God! That has to be the jerkest man that's ever crossed the face of the Earth! It's impossible to describe Harry's personality in this. Man, I just wanna shoot him right on the scarred forehead! Bastard! Grrrrr!

Awesome chapter, by the way! :D

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:48:20 UTC

"Man, I just wanna shoot him right on the scarred forehead!"

Lol that's hilarious.

And I think I've said it before and I'll say it agian. I love bastard!Harry. I don't now why. Probably because once he comes to his senses, he becomes guilty!Harry.

Happy to know you're enjoying the fic.:)

ivichsartre October 28 2006, 12:53:53 UTC

Well, now I really want to see guilty!Harry.

a_boleyn October 13 2006, 00:20:27 UTC

What I don't understand is why Draco has to do everything himself?

I can see him not wanting to dump the kids off on house elves as his parents did (Where ARE the house-elves by the way? Why isn't Dobby hanging around and volunteering to help take care of the kids, at least temporarily?) but they have money ... how about hiring some help? They have 2 children and Draco is pregnant and exhausted but absolutely NO support system. I know that Draco's having babies but did his brain/testicles shrivel up as well?

Why doesn't Draco move into an apartment and SURROUND himself with baby care-takers, nannies?

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:20:10 UTC

Well obviously most people would love to hire care-takers if they could afford it, but I didn't have Draco do that because I'd assume that he was raised by nannies, so he knows what it is like and he knows that the child would develop a relationship with that person that's almost as strong as if not stronger that the one they have with their real parents. After going through everything to have the kids, I doubt he'd want then=m to have a stronger bond with some stranger as opposed to him, their actual parent.Lol, and besides, if he had nannies to take care of the kids and was relaxed, well then there wouldn't be a fic.:)

kurla88 October 13 2006, 01:27:21 UTC

There needs to be a divorce and Draco needs to suck Harry dry, financially. Then he can hire some help, like a_boleyn said. *nodnod*

x_x_j_x_x October 13 2006, 22:13:41 UTC

I was waiting for Draco to say he wanted a divorce during that little confrontation. I think this is one of the first stories where I'm actually hoping they break up because Harry's an asshole and needs to realise what he's missing.

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:50:21 UTC

Lol I'd also be want them to get a divorce if I were reading this fic. Harry's a jerk here and doesn't deserve Draco. At all. But I must say, its a very rare thing for someone to actually want them to break up. I've read lots of fics where I've wanted that, but I always seemed to be the only one.:)

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:21:26 UTC

Taking all of Harry's money. Yes, that would definately be a sutiable punishement for his behaviour.:)

chibidraco October 13 2006, 02:13:12 UTC

Hello, Again
I just wanted to say that I felt like a heel when I saw your new review earlier for my lil monster of a fic . I had read "Afterwards" before but didnt remember to leave you a note *hangs head with shame*
I really like your fic, Harrys being an ass right now though and Draco seems like hes run ragged (or post-partum depression entering into hormonal pregnancy mode) that horrible, all these changes are still fluctuating in his system and Harry plays the oblivious fool.

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:24:35 UTC

I've always thought that Harry was oblivious (a bit thick, you know), and that really shows here because of the fact that he can't seem to realize what Draco's going through and the damage he's causing with all his comments.

And by the way, don't worry. I do that all the time. I'll read a fic I like but I won't comment until weeks after I've read it when I actually feel like commenting. I know its horrible, but I'm a terrible procrastinator. Like look at how long its taken for me to reply to all my comments. Over 15 days. Just horrible.*is ashamed*

ariverrtp October 13 2006, 03:28:06 UTC

Oh! Poor Draco! Did Harry not learn from the first two times around that he probably shouldn't upset Draco- let alone leave him to take care of everyone by himself while he's pregnant? Agh before Draco goes back to Harry he needs to make him beg for it! Very nice though, and I just have to say that I ♥ Queen as well.

(I just read the first five chapters and I can't wait for the next update!)

malfoy_consort October 28 2006, 05:27:21 UTC

Oh I agree, Draco should most definately make Harry grovel before taking him back. And like I said to chibidraco above, I really think Harry is quite thick, so naturally he wouldn't learn from the first two times.

And yes, I love Queen. I had actually never even heard of them until last month when the singer, Freddie Mercury, was on Hollywood's top 20 greatest losses to music. I downloaded some songs and they were awesome. I'm so glad I watched that show and found out about Queen.:)