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malision

Jester

Jun 03, 2010 23:03

Chapter 1 (continued)

Light the fuse and burn it up
Take the path that leads to nowhere

Matha fought back a sneeze.
The lack of rainfall had been bad for this forest-everything crackled. She hadn’t really noticed until now, crawling through the new-formed mud. The swift rain from this afternoon had pounded the ground wet, but summer-desiccated leaves ( Read more... )

temper, matha

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i_write_vamps June 5 2010, 00:53:59 UTC

This duke promises to be very, very interesting. :D I myself cannot wait to meet him. I wonder what he shall be like. :D You MUST post MORE and tell us!!!!
Again, the story is very real, and the characters are just AWESOME. I suck at action, too, but you are a hell of a lot better at it than I am. I cannot WAIT for the next chapter development, because frankly, this story ROCKS thus far, and I - MUST HAVE MORE!!!!
And I am so intrigued to see what you are going to do with this Calvaran society. Very, very intrigued. :D