Help Me,Jack

[mallybabe0559]

Broken

Day after day,

Night after night,

I try to convey to you how much you mean to me.

Through words and actions,

I try to show you that you're all I have.

One smile from you,

One kiss

Erases all the tears and pain you caused today.

But it doesn't matter.

It doesn't last.

I mean nothing to you.

Comments

[ex_metanoia306]

Friend of blackmonkey. Powerful stuff there. The "WTF Did I Ever Do To You" can be dedicated to my ex...I am feeling that one a lot.

Good stuff.

[mallybabe0559]

hey thanks for the comment, you're super cool in my book. right under me of course

[ex_metanoia306]

Lol..thanks ;) Glad to have you on my list now.

[mallybabe0559]

yeah, i added you too. hell of a hassle, but im assured you're worth it.

[nessa723]

that was pretty good...i liked it... i think a lot of girls fall for those damn guys that we know arent right for us but we still end up falling hard for them... :/

[mallybabe0559]

yeah, boys suck, but i wrote it about your sister.

[nessa723]

hahaha.... well yea jack is a special one that can have the horrible effect on you but u just have to love her anyway! hehehe! jk i love u jack!

[mallybabe0559]

yeah she's a little heartbreaker

[selective_want]

I am a friend of Jackies, and I say cut down the wrist, not across. XD

[selective_want]

Oops, double posted, sorry about that. P.S Im only kidding around.

[mallybabe0559]

oh, belive me i know the way. thanks for the advice, though. ;)

[tuesdayatdawn]

i think that's beautiful.
and it's exactly how i feel now.<3

[mallybabe0559]

why thanks you. and fuck whoever made you feel like that.

[cory_cats]

Friend of Jackie's, and wow that poem is very good!

Hang in there, and if you ever need to talk, let me know.

[mallybabe0559]

why thank you