He sat silently, alone hidden among the night time shadows, outstretched in a lazy relaxed manner he reclined at the edge of the world, perched on one of the many curved ribs arching down from Notre Dame Cathedral. This was his favorite place and only refuge from the streets below, from the people and the atmosphere that kept him enthralled and ( Read more... )

“Interesting…” Her tongue slithered around the word as her lips curled back in a silent hiss of emotion she suffocated back into nonexistence as she released the winged beast, watching her faithful servant fall to the ground motionless, and nearly lifeless, sweet silver-blue blood leaked from gnarled teeth, staining the purity of her prison, a home ( Read more... )

Christy stood in the second story window, crouched over the sill her hands lightly placed to hold herself aloft as she watched the sleeping boy. Everything had been rechecked, replaced, and fortified, there was nothing more she could do for her charge but let him sleep…

Aaron had been so bewildered as they left the shop, that a simple mind erase ( Read more... )

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For a long drawn out moment, Aaron stared at the generic numerical clock tick its second hand down the right side, all the way around, then up the left to start its journey again, for several minutes of every day this was his habit, it took place at the same time, it didn’t matter where he was, nor if there were a real clock to stare at ( Read more... )

(Apparently LJ has a limit to how much you can post at one time >>; chapter two and three, read prologue and chapter one first)

Chapter Two: Avalian’s Message.

Silence fell as guards rushed into the throne room, circling the intruder they clustered around him spears and swords drawn and ready, the cloaked figure stood, he didn’t pay them any ( Read more... )

I'm going to try hard not to have to edit these pages as much as I have already done, I like them, I want your opinion on the flow though, see if they slide together well, and that the story is going further, this stuff happens before the part where her family is killed and she's taken away by the demon. So, enjoy :D

Prolog: Something Amis.

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I mean for crying out loud, I cant be happy with anything I write, I mean I like the insert I'm sending, and I like the one I had Friday, but Jesus fking Christ! Okay, so the first insert I've been informed, isn't very... rounded, like it leaves the reader lost and confused, which, is and isn't a good thing! So I thought about adding the ( Read more... )

Well, it's been one LONG Saturday to say the least, I've been up sense nine thirty, and it's already fifteen after one am... so I'm exhausted. I would have written tonight/today, if I had had more time with the computer, not counting the near hour I've been home sense I got back from my friends house, for a quick game of magic after work... * ( Read more... )

OKay! It's... almost 2 am... and I've been up for two hours longer than I thought I would be... dammit! And the stupid dog... bless his silly little heart... keeps whining, it's driving me insane! Anyhow, here's the first chapter rewrite for you Adam, let me know if you like it better or worse, and why this and that you know the drill. <3

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Well this is a revised edited version of what's previously posted. Uhm, in my original story outline this is chapter five. But I might start the actual story with this, instead, have the previous four chapters memories, is that a good idea?

Closing her eyes and rolling them backwards as if to stare into the back of her skull, she forced ( Read more... )