Pokemon fic: A Muddier Me

[mangobug]

Title:  A Muddier Me
Author:  mangobug 
Rating:  PG13 potentially for violence and swearing?
Verse:  Gameverse
Characters:  Silver and his stolen totodile.
Summary:  Five short fics written for pokeprompts musical flash fiction challenge.  These fics are all based around Silver growing up with his totodile.  Enjoy my terrible taste in music <3

Comments

[mangobug]

Aw, thank you so much! It was really fun to write, and I really enjoyed crafting totodile's personality especially. I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the review! <3

[ibuberu]

Oh my gosh, this is wonderful. Silver+Totodile itself is already a rare focus, and I loved what you did with it. It was pretty simple in terms of writing style, but the emotions you portrayed were wonderful. I liked the desperation and loneliness in the beginning, and how it transitioned quite smoothly into acceptance and happiness. The way you handled their relationship was superb, though personally I find that Silver wouldn't be one that could cry so easily! Still, other than that, I felt that you portrayed the trainer just as well as you portrayed the pokemon. I'll be mem'ing this because it is just that great :D

[mangobug]

I'm glad you liked it! For that third one there, I kind of wanted to do something that would have been Silver's worst moment as a trainer, him reflecting back on some of the worse things he's done. For most of them I wouldn't imagine him to get too worked up, but if he ever hurt his pokemon, well, that might get him a little emotional upon realizing that they're creatures, not just things to play with. :) Thank you for the review!

[ghosted]

ohh. I really enjoyed this. I liked your Totodile, and think you did a really good job of showing how Pokémon are loyal to their trainers when that's not the easiest thing to be.

The time was long past for cheerful, loving embraces, of happy forgiveness and reconciliation. He’d never learned how.

That line ;_;

[mangobug]

I'm glad you liked it! I had a great time crafting Totodile's personality especially, so I'm glad that other people like him as well. :) Thanks so much for the review!

[mangobug]

:D Thanks so much, I'm glad that you liked it! The last story was probably my favorite part to write, because nothing is more fun than a giant lizard in bows. :) Thank you for the review!

[cowgoes_quack]

fkdsajga this was awesome :D I felt so bad for Totodile in the beginning, but I'm glad he's happy now. And the transition from sad to happy was wonderful. "After inspecting it for a moment, Feraligatr smiled happily and bumped their fists together." gfdsjalkgl that image is so :D. YOU GO FERALIGATR YOU ADORABLE THING YOU SHOW THEM WHO'S BOSS ; w; (also omg I love I'll Make a Man Out of You <333)

[mangobug]

first of all oh god your icon aaaaaa
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second of all, thanks so much! I really loved the idea of Feraligatr fistbumping. He's got it like that. :) Thanks so much for the review.
Also lol Mulan. I was lucky I got that song haha <33 love it