Comments | maorian_queen: UN POEM

maorian_queen

UN POEM

Feb 08, 2005 10:31

this is in the early stages of being in an early stage of a poem...somehow that made sense *nods*
it was inspired by kendra's blog...somehow...*nods again* without further adieu...
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filmcanister February 9 2005, 02:01:51 UTC

condsider playing with format.
love and lack of punctuation lends itself well to that.
perhaps italiciesessdfzz. whatever.

filmcanister February 9 2005, 02:21:44 UTC

also, you have lots of BIG WORDS!
which stand out unless you can try to put more BIG WORDS in there to balance them out. which would be cool, because BIG WORDS are, like, the ultimate cool.

maorian_queen February 9 2005, 14:57:21 UTC

so, in laymen's terms, make the thesaurus my partner in crime.
this sucks;in the past, well yesterday i slapped out two and a verse poems, none of which i completely grasp in context or concept, and none of which ...i don't even know if i have the right to call them poems.it's so weird...i am a decrepid poetess.that word holds such high prestige, i feel ashamed to even use it. the great ones,Plath,Dickinson, Woolf(i consider her a poetess whether others do or not.)cross my mind, and i feel the need to denounce my title to cavewoman,neanderthal, scribbling out her thoughts on the wall. argh