Comments | mara_joy: H50 Fic: Won't Leave You In The Dark

mara_joy

H50 Fic: Won't Leave You In The Dark

Dec 06, 2011 16:20

Title: Won't Leave You In The Dark (Part 2)
Series: No Keia La, No Keia Po, A Mau Loa. Part 1 here...
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fic, steve/danny, ep:210tag, rating:r, angst-fic, hawaii five-0, episodetag, hurt-steve

Comments 29

kare December 7 2011, 02:41:35 UTC

Really love this fic.

he begs whoever was listening that none of this would be for nothing.

This echoing of Jenna's words was just wonderful!

I love how realistically you portrayed Steve's injuries and Danny's feelings. And the end...really love the necklace at the end.

Beautiful work!

mara_joy December 13 2011, 01:09:51 UTC

Thank you!

snoewhite December 7 2011, 03:49:53 UTC

*I just want to wrap this up and put it under my tree* Such a nice present!
Hugs,
Kel

mara_joy December 13 2011, 01:10:08 UTC

LOL. Thank you so much!

alwaysateen December 7 2011, 04:41:34 UTC

Oh wow, what a wonderful sequel. Love it!

mara_joy December 13 2011, 01:10:23 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!

sherry57 December 7 2011, 07:27:10 UTC

Fantastic look into Danny's head and his thoughts during this episode. Also loved the more realistic after effects of the beating Steve took than we got on the show....love fanfiction for giving us the details and you in particular for this story. Thanks hon!

mara_joy December 13 2011, 01:10:53 UTC

Thank you!

bombom_mamasita December 7 2011, 10:49:08 UTC

I loved it!!!!

mara_joy December 13 2011, 01:11:08 UTC

I'm so glad you did! =)

Thank you!