Don't Say Goodbye - Chapter 2

[marakeshsparrow]

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thank you,so happy to see your new update

[thucdsp]

omg ....you made me cry....

RE: thank you,so happy to see your new update

[marakeshsparrow]

The tears have started again! Don't worry though--there won't be as much to cry over in this story. ^_^

[hyunnyb]

Wave that "creative license" proudly!
I too have to remind myself that this is a fic, I so wish that they were in contact with each other after the split even if it was painful like this. I love that their relationship has seemingly reversed. It may be heartbreaking now but in the long run I think they are both going to have a much deeper understanding of the others pain. I have high hopes that eventually these traumatic moments are going to put them on even footing for the first time in their lives.
Your angst is exceptional as always, tears have been shed again! Definitely one of my favorite stories ever<3

[marakeshsparrow]

Yes! Yes! Yes! You hit the nail right on the head. Through better understanding each other's feelings they'll have an even more solid foundation than before. So the role reversal is particularly important.

I'm glad you enjoyed the angst! Haha. I had to insert a bit in here for old times sake, but in general this story will be a bit more optimistic. ^_^

Thank you for the insightful comment! (as always) <3

[benggy82]

my chest is hurting so much,but i think i am a masochist aswell ... looking forward for the next update :*

[marakeshsparrow]

//raises hand to join the masochist club// Ah sweet pain . . . I enjoy the angst too much sometimes, hahaha.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[yunjaemrcn]

I don't know if I told you before but you are an amazing author! Thank you for your hard working dear

[marakeshsparrow]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the compliment, it fuels me to keep going! (Though I would probably be writing this even if no one was reading it, I'm too invested, hahaha)

I'm glad you're enjoying!

[ladylilyanne]

This was a rather heartbreaking chapter, which is good in a sense. I know That Jae is being rather unfair right now, but Yunho quite honestly needs this. Jae needs to stand up for himself and understand just how much Yunho is a part of him and how much is truly himself before he can actually get back into a healthy relationship with him. Although, I kind of feel like this sequel is sort of invalidating the epilogue. Would you be able to a dd a scene in a later chapter to show how the epilogue fits into the sequel? Thanks for updating!

[marakeshsparrow]

Actually I'm including the epilogue in this story! That's Dec 2014 remember! So basically it's leading up to how that took place and explains what was really going on between the two of them at their reunion. ^_^

[ladylilyanne]

That's great, thanks. I really want to see how they manage to get themselves together in time to have such a wistful (and less obsessive Yunho) reunion since it is only a year away based on the current past timeline. ^^