Fic: Never Wanna Fall Apart (Luke/Gail)

[margieruns]

Title: Never Wanna Fall Apart
Summary: Porn Battle Entry #2
Pairing: Luke/Gail
Rating: Barely R
Word Count: 1307
A/N: never done a Luke/Gail before...  Don't expect too much :)

Comments

[waltzmatildah]

Yyyyeeessssssssssssssssss.

TO ALL OF THIS.

Gail and Luke are my life right now. IT IS ALWAYS SO VALIDATING TO FIND ~OTHERS LIKE ME!!

This is so freaking perfect. How in control she is (or keeps saying she is) despite the fact that little things keep happing like the fact that she DID stay the night. And the fact that there was conversing involved. And the fact that there was even cuddling!!

THESE TWO!!!!!!!

Write all the fic, kthnx.

[margieruns]

haha, I got this comment first thing when I woke up this morning and it made me smile.

thanks so much for enjoying it!

[waltzmatildah]

Thank YOU so much for writing it :)

[tikvarn]

I just like them together so much - and I never thought I'd say that about Luke. For some reason I feel like they'll just GET each other, you know? I really hope we're not building them up to be disappointed next season.

This was super hot and somehow... very comfortable? I love that even though she was planning on jetting out of there she stayed the night, she made herself comfortable in his house and she went back for another round.

"To do something. Turned out that something was Luke." This line made me legitimately laugh. Perfect and so... Gail.

(I love the little detail of his feet hanging over the bed!)

So, so good. I hope you've got some more for us :)

[margieruns]

You know I had to put the feet in. If I didn't get that out of my system it may have popped up somewhere else.

[anonymous]

While I can see them having some hot sex, for some reason I like Gail/Dov, I can just picture it being more than a hookup there. Rebounds can be fun though, and I really didn't want to see Gail/Dov without time between-the whole "bro thing".

[margieruns]

to be perfectly honest, I would also prefer Gail/Dov. But I thought I'd give Luke his shot ;)

[anonymous]

Yeah, it does seem like they're hinting at Luke/Gail, but they were with Gail/Dov too and what a disappoint so far. Overall tend to be more of an Andy/Sam fan I guess but everyone needs someone. I can see Luke/Jo being on again at some point, they just seem like the couple that will always have some connection. Just from what I've heard I think they may do something with Gail and Nick, the new rookie.

-taina

[margieruns]

I know it doesn't look good for Gail/Dov, but I'm hoping they revisit it eventually. I know it's not in the works for S3, but maybe later? I suppose it was more important to preserve the Dov/Chris dynamic.

I could literally dissect this for hours. Best if I stop now. :)

HOLY

[comearoundtome]

This was awesome. I swear it's fics like this that convince me Luke & Gail are in the running for the (2nd) hottest couple on this show.

I loved seeing the differences in this from a Sam/Andy fic, which is obviously what I'm used to reading. The references to white skin and blonde hair and blue eyes and the TALL references... LOVE THEM. It brings something new and different to the stuff I'm used to reading.

It was super hot all around, but I gotta say this is my favorite: She smirked and ran a hand down under the comforter, tracing her nails down over his back. His muscles bunched under her hand, and she thought she saw a twitch of a smile when she tugged the blanket away. “It’s time to get lucky.”

Because it's so completely THEM. Gail's nails and Luke's smiling and the way she totally takes control. SO GOOD. Really enjoyed this fic.

[catteo]

Well this is basically A++++ material!

I am VERY impressed that you're writing Sam/Andy and Luke/Gail and basically keeping the flag flying for RB fandom at the porn battle! This was super hot and so in character and I REALLY enjoyed it!

KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!

[margieruns]

in truth, the unporniest porn ever. But thanks :)