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mari_posa21

Keahi Journal

Jan 29, 2008 20:13

Been a while I know, but this was running around my head all day.

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Comments 4

pixellatedcake January 30 2008, 03:34:45 UTC

Poor Keahi. I can commiserate so well... all I can think about is who is or is not kissing me when I've bigger fish to fry. :\

God I love these entries. They're always so well-written.

ummm... doesn't this belong on Cinnasugg? johnist January 30 2008, 09:30:24 UTC

Poor Keahi, I agree, but... doesn't this post belong on the Cinnasugg journal? ;-) I'm not trying to make you angry though. Great writing!

Re: ummm... doesn't this belong on Cinnasugg? mari_posa21 January 30 2008, 12:10:09 UTC

Cinnasugg is friends only and the Keahi journals are cross posted to other places. So no.

the_archmage January 30 2008, 19:29:01 UTC

The psychology is sound. By nature we will always focus on what affects us deeply over what affects those around us. People sometimes confuse the two and attempt to shelter selfish actions with the mask of 'greater good'. The best examples of people doing a 'greater good' for their own purpose would be parents.

I'm going to go with the flow. This is a really well writen short section. I can't give any critique because I don't see anything that can be improved on it as it is. Great work!