Some Things Never Change

Mar 06, 2011 01:00

Title: Some Things Never Change
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is not true, I made it all up. All names are just borrowed and they have absolutely nothing to do with what I write.
Author's Notes: Written for the caras_de_pecas Valentine's Day challenge '11. I chose the words dinner, hugs, kisses, love letters & only you. Dan is ( Read more... )

player: daniel agger, pairing: agger/torres, fandom: football, fic, player: fernando torres

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vicky86x March 6 2011, 00:36:50 UTC
Awww I was just about to go to bed, but I saw your update and I just couldn't resist to read this now :)

this is soooo cute and kind of sad at the same time. I really feel for Dan, he really had a rough time, without parents, not being able to become a professional footballer, his feelings for Fernando, thinking that he doesn't love him back. But in the end it seems he get what he deserves which is obviously Fernando :)

I love the little detail that their first kiss after they met again isn't perfect at all, it's sweet and somehow fitting to their whole relationship :) well they have their perfect first kiss later on, so it seems it always takes them a bit longer to get what they want, the way they want it ;) well but better late than never, I guess?

And I'm happy you made Fernando a Liverpool player, it definitely fits better that way ;)

Lovely "little" story :) so thanks for sharing <3

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marie16fh March 6 2011, 10:13:28 UTC
Yeah, Dan hasn't had it easy, having to deal with something like that :-( The way he feels his life is ruined because he can never be a professional footballer, and when he sees Fernando living the dream. And that he's never really gotten over his first love, even if they never really did anything.

Ah, glad you liked the kiss :-) It certainly wasn't perfect, a bit unexpected and nervous, but yes; afterwards they share something much better :-) It definitely took them some time to get what they wanted, but this is the start of something beautiful, I'm sure ;-)

Haha, I had to :D

Thank you so much <3

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megzchyna March 6 2011, 01:00:32 UTC
Aww this was so sweet Marie!
I haven't been on LJ for a while so this is the best comeback fic.

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marie16fh March 6 2011, 10:07:07 UTC
Awh, thank you! ^_^
Poor you, I hate being away from LJ, haha :D

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wh_mermaid March 6 2011, 01:02:16 UTC
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Forgive the keyboard smashing, but OH MY GOD I love this. I seriously have tears in my eyes and am trying not to cry right now. This is so heart touching and beautiful *sniffle*

This is perfect <333333

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marie16fh March 6 2011, 10:08:09 UTC
<3 !!

Awwh, cutest comment ever. I very much approve of keyboard smashing, it warms my heart :D So glad you liked it! *hugs*

Thank you so much!

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marie16fh March 6 2011, 10:06:22 UTC
So glad you liked it ^_^
Thank you! x

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marie16fh March 6 2011, 10:05:01 UTC
Glad you liked it!
Thank you! x

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