Comments | marie16fh: But There You Go

marie16fh

But There You Go

May 16, 2011 22:32

Title: But There You Go
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This is all just a work of fiction!
Author's Note: Teenage!AU. Big surprise.
Summary: Dan never planned on falling in love during summer.
Wordcount: 1,991

( I fell in love on the seaside )

player: daniel agger, pairing: agger/torres, fandom: football, fic, player: fernando torres

Comments 54

elf_md May 16 2011, 20:46:02 UTC

Dude. I was just reading your M&M story again. :D

marie16fh May 16 2011, 20:53:06 UTC

Haha :D You're awesome <3

elf_md May 16 2011, 20:57:44 UTC

And then you go and break my heart with this one.

Oh babes, so beautiful and painful and gosh. Brilliant piece of writing.

marie16fh May 16 2011, 21:10:09 UTC

Very glad you liked it, hun! <3 Thank you so much!

chocoholic_81 May 16 2011, 20:47:06 UTC

oh wow, poor Danny - what a heartbreaking end...
but on the other side you created such beautiful images of a summer romance
I fell in love with this story - seriously.
It makes me wanna fall in love myself this summer ;-)

marie16fh May 16 2011, 20:55:19 UTC

I guess Fernando is a bit better at separating love and summer romance. So glad you liked it :-)
I miss summer :D Can't wait for it! I wanna find myself a summer flirt, too ;-)

Thank you <3

littlesumo May 16 2011, 20:49:21 UTC

Oh this is awesome and lovely and cute and hot!

I'm so glad you posted it (and I still don't know why you needed my permission :) )

marie16fh May 16 2011, 21:09:16 UTC

Oh, glad you liked it! :-)

Thank you <3
I just had to, idek, it was just with the title and yeah... I was unsure, didn't want to do anything without asking you first *shuffles* Well, it's all good :-)

poynterjoness May 16 2011, 21:10:25 UTC

come on msn you poop.

marie16fh May 16 2011, 21:11:59 UTC

Can't, sleeping now! I'm so tired! Gotta get up during the day tomorrow. Hey, when I'm coming to you? :-))))

poynterjoness May 16 2011, 21:13:57 UTC

that what i wanted to ask you about, but you ignored my text hoooours ago, so.

i dunno, im not doing anything tomorrow, so whenever.
not before like.. 11 though. i need to watch cycling till 1am, so wanna sleep a bit.

vicky86x May 16 2011, 21:12:23 UTC

awww this is somehow sad, but so sweet as well, I think your last paragraph sums it up really well. As long as there are no regrets it's absolutely worth it! :)

now I want to go on holidays and have a little summer romance as well ;)

oh, and the sex-scene was really, really nice ;)

marie16fh May 17 2011, 11:31:38 UTC

Dan's gonna hurt now, but he'll get over it, and I think he'll manage to look back on it and smile :-)

I want that too ;-) Can't wait for summer!

Glad you liked it ;-) It's short, but the point gets across *lol*

Thank you <3