Comments | marjory: LJ Idol 9 - Week 15

marjory

LJ Idol 9 - Week 15 - Chekhov's Gun

Jul 27, 2014 14:06

Comments 22

roina_arwen July 28 2014, 04:40:54 UTC

Nice job with this. I like the way you referenced the pistols, and the description of them at the beginning was especially lovely.

marjory July 28 2014, 11:10:51 UTC

Thank you!

adoptedwriter July 28 2014, 19:52:34 UTC

Great dialogue! AW

marjory July 28 2014, 20:25:20 UTC

Thank you!

retro_rider55 July 28 2014, 21:51:06 UTC

- what; no white feathers?

marjory July 28 2014, 23:25:48 UTC

Nope. I tend to grow hair instead! ;)

retro_rider55 July 29 2014, 21:55:40 UTC

Sorry; this reminded me of "The Four Feathers", for some reason.

marjory July 30 2014, 01:32:35 UTC

Ah! Good film!

Also, the feathers vs hair thing is my standard response, but probably just a familial joke rather than a proper one. Oops!

bleodswean July 29 2014, 13:34:28 UTC

A nice compact morality play.

marjory July 29 2014, 15:42:29 UTC

Thank you!

kehlen July 30 2014, 13:05:15 UTC

This is delightful. I enjoyed the language very much, as well as the painful and useless attempt to dissuade the duelist. I think you have captured the essence of dueling very well here.

marjory July 30 2014, 23:02:31 UTC

Thank you!

The whole duelling thing was always so senseless.