The Real LJ Idol * Season 11 * Week 13: Fan Death

[marlawentmad]

I spun a web

Comments

[static_abyss]

I love it when structure in poetry is used to enhance the words. Like that little bit at the end where it almost looks like your words are free falling. I love that. 100% always gets me. Well done!

[lost_nepenthe]

Such a departure from your usual format. Simple. Sweet. Elegant. I love it.

[d0gs]

I love the melodious feel of this!

[bleodswean]

This has such a nice flow!!! It’s amazing to me how much character/story you can entice in the shortest sharpest shape of words! Fantastic!

[adoptedwriter]

Lovely wording!